WE NEED A PLOT! D8

[Rose]

alrighty, so we need a plot. Obviously the one we have right now was just thrown together within a few extra minutes of my spare time, so ya. We need plot suggestions because as of late my ideas have been running dry. x.x

so....

ANY PLOT SUGGESTIONS!?

Please do post ANYTHING that you think would be good right here. But let me say right now, only the current Royalty MIGHT be mentioned in the plot, no particular character/characters.

[Dark Link M Smith]

ummmm the king be put under a spell by some outsider and only a few knights can save the kingdom?

[Rose]

o.o well, I think that we want to keep it with the whole "New king" thing. Seeing how the kind is one of the member's characters, it wouldn't work. good idea though. ^-^

[Dark Link M Smith]

okay. then it's off to war with some other kingdom.

[Ran'chir]

Seeing as we have a new king maybe we can create a time of upheaval rapid changes in an old system. These changes in the system could be used to create a more over arching battle those whom want the status quo and those whom wish to see the kingdom change. With this type of plot any one and every one can play a part either for the change or against the change. All that would be required would be a king willing to dedicate some time toward creating some dogma and small amounts of back story and a central opposing figure to be the kings equal in opposite. This figure could either be moving to create the change or resist depending on the position the king wants to take.

[Rose]

hm... I like your points Ran and Link... But I don't think it will be against another kingdom, but rather an underground society? Kind of like the Darkspon on Dragon age, or the twilight series against normal society. lol They hide in fear! (No offense all of you who loves twilight, it is a joke) Then we will have basically Good VS Evil. ^-^

[( COLONEL )]

An underground society sounds lovely. Maybe include Ran’s aspect of “wanting change” or something. On my other site, I was going to make a little mini-plot in my thread to cause drama that basically had Rayven’s identity spilled. Since on the other site, any kind of demon is not acceptable, but here they kind of are, though not fully… Maybe due to Rayven’s species exposure or something, a secret society tried to move on in and gain control over the slightly anarchy kingdom? I dunno. >[ I am sleepy so if I make any sense, I deserve a cookie.

[blazinvire]

The 'Locked away Ancient Great Evil' concept has always been interesting to me, but I also like the inner turmoil of the kingdom trying to adjust to change, especially with new royalty who've been voted in by different parties or something.

Turmoil could probably breed multiple factions within the kingdom and split the place up according to ideals, some people for, some against, others with different agendas entirely like total destruction or some such.

Some kind of cult pulling strings to put the people they want into royalty/power so they can exert control from within the shadows.
Could include assassination attempts, PR campaigns, lots of distrust and daggers in the back, as well as royalty-side secret society to try and shut down the corrupt organisations out there.
Paranoid guards are always good fun, some kind of military aspect incorporated into the city+surroundings.

Though a genius villain with a mind-boggling plan for power is also pretty awesome but hard to make usually.

Just some ideas I randomly picked up

[Rose]

hm... I like... -gives Colo a cookie-

One of their things could be to get rid of demons, and change it into a 'new world' kind of thing. I like that 'locked away evil' thing there Blazin. I am typing up something real quick now, and will post it up to give some what of a idea?

xP

Edited:

Alright, here is what I got. ^-^; what do you guys think?

The war had been going on for decades against an unknown evil, who had risen with the past king’s death. Blood shed to and fro, staining the land’s dirt a crimson with the blood of the innocent, and the guilty. Darker nights, and shadowed days, they were all that was left of the Kingdom. Only the bravest of men were to push forward, take the step up, and fight for their Kingdom, many losing their lives in the process. No one could have thought it would end so quickly. Their greatest fear, and their greatest glory, lost within the matter of a single battle.

All of the troops had been gathered, Kaharini’s King leading one glory filled army, And the one known as Hell’s Wolf leading the other. The twilight had struck, rain clouds lingering high in the sky. The Field had looked like an ocean of silver, and black. Hell’s Wolf’s men with their postures lowered, and their swords gripped tightly in their hands stood by the thousands, while the King’s stood by the hundreds. The army was not even so much as near to being equal to that of the other, but they were a match in talent. The King’s army, they had trained for years, keening their skill.

With the first boom of thunder in the distance, bringing down the first of the freezing rain, archers drew their bows in the eerie silence, and released all hell upon the opposing army. “For Kaharini!” The King’s deep voice yelled over his men, leading them to charge after them on horseback. “Let their blood stain this land!” A hissing voice yelled over the opposing army, leading them to raise their swords into the air, and charge towards the Kingdom’s heroes.

Thousands upon thousands of men died that day, the rest were lucky even if greatly injured. The rain washed the smell of blood from the air, making crimson streams run thorough the land. It soaked into the dirt, and stained the grass’s roots with it’s un-holly color. From once golden beauty, to crimson disaster. The peak of dawn had pulled itself out from what seemed to be a never ending night, and shed the crying light upon what was left of the fighting men.

The main battle had still been taking place. King, against Hell’s Wolf. The rising of a silver blade, and a quick downward movement, what seemed like an eternity had ended. Hell’s Wolf, he was finally dead. So many years of hell being brought to the kingdom was gone, as if nothing could have ever happened. Yet what was left of the King, it was gruesome. A fatal arrow sticking from his chest, causing the man to fall to his knees, and gaze over the land.

This place, he had devoted his whole life to protecting it, building it to it’s glory. The most drastic of the changes that were to come, happened with a single night’s fighting. He had finally rid the land of it’s greatest fear. Now, with his wife’s rule, the Queen, this land could flourish. A small smile smeared over the man’s lips as the remaining of the other army retreated, leaving his men to run to his side.

They carried him back to the castle, and called in his wife. With a final kiss goodbye, the Kingdom’s hero lied back onto the bed, closed his bloodshot brown eyes, and sighed with his last breath. “I love you, darling.” The man knew that those words would echo through her, letting her know that he would always be there. He would wait for her in the afterlife, and be there with her until it was her time.

The tears of the entire Kingdomw could have poured from the Queen’s eyes that night, as she realized the love of her life was no longer there. She would have to wait until her death to see him once more. But with his death, the woman knew one thing. The hell that had run along the land was gone for the time, and it was all due to that man. Word spread like wiled fire, about the man’s heroic death. His fall of glory, and the end of all hell in the Kingdom. Sure, there was still the normal stealing, but that was to always be there, as there would always be life on the earth… As far as they knew.

Years went by slowly, the Queen’s shape growing worse. Her newly acquainted body guard, Rayven, and stayed with her to the end of her days. She pronounced him the King of Kaharini, sending the man to uphold their land, and bring it forward to success. Yet, there was something that was looming in the back. The darkness, it had been building. Strange men, they had been returning to the shadows, making the night a dangerous time.

Rumor of Hell’s Wolf returning had become a common to hear thorough the Kingdom. This time? Oh this time they were not there to just take the kingdom. This time, they wanted to destroy all of the demons, and in this case, mainly the King. Plots had been taken, and sides were to be chosen. With the rising evil slowly creeping back up to it’s mite in Kaharini, and the Kingdom’s unsuspecting victims living on their daily lives, There was only one question left.

What side will you chose?

Good?

or…

Evil?

[dinscrusader]

Honestly, can we do all of them?

What if, whale the Kaharini Demon Extermenation takes effect (With Cana involved, of course) The King gets out of the picture and with no one else to hold his place for the noblity the courts go Byzantium trying to secure a claim before the Prince returns. Add that to the fact that the Sjuck is going to get really pissed by the whole "No female roleity" bit(Heads up, they're Matriarchal), they attempt to explote the gap and invade.

[Rose]

well, we have Rayven as out king. o.o; I think that our rising underground society thing might be good... I duno. xD what does everyone think of the little plot that I posted up here before we make any permanent decisions?

[Vash]

This time? Oh this time they were not there to just take the kingdom. This time, they wanted to destroy all of the >>demons<<, and in this case, mainly the King

You have a little error there. But it sounds great maybe change Hell's Wolf to another name. That one sounds corny. And this is my two cents so don't take it to heart.

[Rose]

lol I won't. xD o0 what is wrong with demons? and ya, it was just a filler for the moment. -was tired when typing-

[Vash]

It sounds like Hell's wolf is trying to kill all the demons and king

[Rose]

yup.